Sunday, February 14, 2010

Things Untold

I searched the word lists,
to see if I could find,
something that would reflect
what was on my mind.

Guess what, there was not even one,
that captured it just right,
For no one else can understand
what I would like to write.

Further, It is even more difficult,
to pen it down,
For how do I portray ,
the friend that I have found?

I closed my eyes to see,
if the darkness has a solution
for someone I adore,
and even so much more.

And then I realized ,

Mere words cannot describe
the many qualities you show,
The love and affection that
you share with those you know.

You were always there,
When I lost some sheen,
I won’t say any more here,
For only you know what I mean.

I struggled hard to describe you,
Even, tried to invent a language anew,
Yet I failed to capture,
All the things that make you…YOU.

I will therefore, be satisfied,
And hope that you understand,
How I feel about you,
Emotions with words I cannot show.

9 comments:

The Torpid Rambler said...
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Zoro said...

Perfectly caught thoughts blended with the right emotions ... well told mate ... whoz it all about :D

Unknown said...

beautifully written....

pranit said...

thanks u all :)

सेतू said...

very well said :)

Prashant said...

A beautiful poem. Keep it up!

Unknown said...

awesome lines mr pranit...
Keep it up..

Kirthi said...

I'm still curious to know who's it all about...

Unknown said...

Superb