Friday, September 14, 2007

I am your's


I feel for u,
when u r not in a mood,
and there's noone too good
when u r badly hurt,
and there's noone for ur support

I will stand by u,
when no one can understand,
and u r left as an isolated strand,
when u r completely lost,
regretting the dark side of the past.

I will fight for u,
when u lose all the hope,
and it becomes difficult to cope.
when the hunters are on the prowl,
and u r the endangered soul.

I live for u,with u,
till the dusk in my life sets in,
I will wait till then,
to tell the untold,
" Oh my Dear!! I m ur soul."

14 comments:

pranit said...

Hurray!!finally found some rhyming!! :)

Guru Chaitanya said...

simple. one of the very good poems so far i read/ cheers man...:)

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Venkat Rangan said...

OMG!! seriously this one is gud... yeah as u indicated it does rhyme... unlike the first one :P ... anyway not my language mabbe :) .... good work... too much positive stuff from my side this time... dont expect this in future... :P

pranit said...

it will get better in future..im sure..thank u

Vamsi said...

hey.....
even though i'm ur bad admirer of u...at this point u proved me wrong ...u r even worst....

hehehe...jus kidding...gude poem....
carry the gude work...

Zoro said...

i see pheku no fakin for the first time :P :)

pranit said...

@vamsi: thanks ra...u arent wrong neway..im worst in the things i feel im best at.

@varun: yeah, it all depends on the way u percieve me...i m a open book but unread :P

Anthony said...

@pranit

Poem nee size lo vundhi..Matching
Poem bagundhi..Not Matching
Hurray!! me too finally found some rhyming!! :)

Poetry meekey kaadhu maaku vachu...

aashish_iconoclast? said...

kewl buddy.. the last line changed everything, a clever move.. ;)

pranit said...

@ tony: i dont see any rhyming in ur words, nor does it make any sense to me..u knw, i m dumb.

@aashish:

thanks dude!!

Ramachandra Kuravi said...

a poem????naaa a rhythm of life ,a sense of truth a feeling of love put forth
in simplest of terms ,so light yet so heavy ,so nostalgic yet very romantic.

wish u a love of life.

Unknown said...

wow! eh talent kooda vunda sir meeku??

anyways thts a gud try!!

:)